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Revision
Activity
Rewrite and
punctuate the sentences below for greater clarity, coherence,
tone and style.
1.
I will be the word’s greatest nurse and I will always
do my best and I will always “be there” for my patients.
2.
There was a good chance that I would be given an examination by
the sadistic dentist that loved to inflict pain and also was
laughing throughout the extractions.
3.
The excrescence secreting from the impairment in the
flesh was horrendous.
4.
While the nurses surrounded the old man and were trying to cheer
up his wife I stood in the back
of the room tears standing in my eyes plus a pain in my heart.
5.
Experiences are those things that shape our lives and
mold us into the people we are.
6.
Throughout my undergraduate experience it is the lesson I
learned about service during my high school which were stressful
nonetheless that remains forever in my heart.
7.
I am convinced that leaving money aside my commitment to
integrity and helping other people and by a willingness to work
hard I will succeed in medical school.
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